Lust foolish (08-06-2021)

08-06-2021, Today I start a new pop composition. I plan it a lot of strings, viola or violin, and I have an interesting poem, and it’s a good thing to write music for it.

Google gave us a condition for bloggers to update their posts within two weeks. So I have two weeks for the song. It’s actually very good, it makes me work quicker and possibly brings me closer, I really, really hope, to writing a hit that will sound everywhere.

The new composition is called Lust foolish. It is about a young man who is entangled in his feelings. He suffers from lack of attention and internal complexes that prevent him from getting closer to his dream. Here is the verse to start.

“I need an attention
Whatever the kind
A mentally tensioned
Or feminine lined

Prohibited finely
On in, to the core
The playful my mind
I hate and adore

I try to persuade
My lust foolish self
To play disobeyed
The sin number twelve

That’s ad of success
For them, feel an envy
I shall not express it
Too frenzily friendly

Indulging into
The feminine tension
I’m languishing through
Distractive dimensioned”

19-06-2021, I have finished the harmony and lyrics. Somehow it’s taken me quite a span. I’ve been distracted by some non-musical issues, and, thanks to your attention, now I am back on track. Here is lyrics with chords and the Korg marks. The base key is Em with some cross-key intervention. I hope you will like non-standard key changes.

Key of Em

(intro) 1-8
D-Em-G-Am 1-4 intro2
C-F#dim-D 5-7 var2
D 8 fill2

(main) 9-16
I need an attention Em 9 var1
Whatever the kind F#dim 10 var1
A mentally tensioned |Em Am| 11 var1
Or feminine lined |C D| 12 fill1

Prohibited finely Em 13 var1
On in, to the core |G Am| 14 var1
The playful my mind C 15 var1
I hate and adore |C D| 16 fill2

(break) F#dim 17 break

(chorus) 18-25
I try to persuade |C D| 18 var2
My lust foolish self Em 19 var2
To play disobeyed |C D| 20 var2
The sin number twelve |G B| 21 fill2

(break) B 26 fill3

(chorus2) 27-34
I try to persuade |Eb F| 27 var2
My lust foolish self Gm 28 var2
To play disobeyed |Eb F| 29 var2
The sin number twelve |Bb D| 30 fill2

That’s ad of success |Eb F| 31 var2
For them, feel an envy |F#dim Gm| 32 var2
I shall not express it |Eb F| 33 var2
Too frenzily friendly |Ab D| 34 var2

(break) G 35 break

(interlude)
D-Em-G-Am-C-F#dim-D 36-42 var3
D 43 fill2

(main2) 44-51
Indulging into Em 44 var1
The feminine tension F#dim 45 var1
I’m languishing through |Em Am| 46 var1
Lust foolish intentioned |C D| 47 fill1

Suppressed up inside Em 48 var1
And endlessly tensioned |G Am| 49 var1
I am getting contrite C 50 var1
Distractive dimensioned |C D| 51 fill2

(break) F#dim 52 break

(chorus) 53-60
I try to persuade |C D| 53 var2
My lust foolish self Em 54 var2
To play disobeyed |C D| 55 var2
The sin number twelve |G B| 56 fill2

(break) B 61 fill3

(chorus2) 62-69
I try to persuade |Eb F| 62 var2
My lust foolish self Gm 63 var2
To play disobeyed |Eb F| 64 var2
The sin number twelve |Bb D| 65 fill2

That’s ad of success |Eb F| 66 var2
For them, feel an envy |F#dim Gm| 67 var2
I shall not express it |Eb F| 68 var2
Too frenzily friendly |Ab D| 69 var2

(break) G 70 break

(ending)
D-Em-G-Am-Em 71-75

20-06-2021, The next step is creating melody and choosing an appropriate musical style. I have chosen an unplugged style – acoustic guitar and bass plus some drums. Here is a piece of the style and melody played with the grand piano.

26-06-2021, I have finished the composition. I hope you like it. https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=hGMS61KXwrY&list=RDAMVMhGMS61KXwrY

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